Friday, June 17, 2011

Road Works

Croeso Ready Writers, June 2011. 

There’s only one thing worse than a hole in the road and that’s the disruption caused by trying to repair it.
It isn’t the hole’s fault; neither can we blame the road. If we are honest the reason the hole appeared in the first place is the weight of  traffic  and a refusal to be prevented from enjoying that most basic of modern human rights - freedom to travel when, how and where we desire using the infernal combustion engine and its associated mechanology.
Whatever the size of the hole and however important the road, it could most simply be fixed by closing the highway for a few hours and allowing the workmen to do their job while we make alternative arrangements. This may mean staying at home for a change; discovering a more scenic route; considering why we actually drive any way or simply sharing our transport arrangements rather than continuing with our individualistic and private carriages which carry such a toxic premium for our descendants.
Common sense has never accompanied the nation’s locomotive aspirations. Each new mass transport system has been introduced by successive decisions which appease the fast buck rather than slow assurance of getting from A to B at minimum cost to the environment.
Horses, our original power source, were enhanced through track and canal bringing increased speed and loads but retaining that sense of tranquillity and co-existence with our natural environment. Then came the kettle’s curse as Mr. Watt realised that steam could be harnessed as well as horses and these beautiful creatures were eventually reduced to a mere definition of what a kettle on wheels could achieve.
So was born the industrial revolution - and what a revolution it was - as wheels upon wheels turned up and down the land and across the world. Each revolution dependant on fossil fuel, the legacy of our sunken past resurrected to bring in another judgement day.
We got used to steam and even grew to love these mighty engines as they romantically wove across the land knitting distant towns together into the same timeframe. Railways became synonymous with proper time-keeping and stations with the whole range of human emotions in the ‘meeting and greeting’, the ‘letting go’, and the ‘minding of the gap’. Brief encounters were rife and we all know what happened on the Orient Express.
This has been called the golden age of steam - but was it fool’s gold? It tarnished so quickly,  to be replaced by dirty diesel, un-manned and un-romantic stations, or those lonely ‘halts’, and timetables that could be trusted only to the extent that they would succumb to fallen leaves or the wrong kind of snow!
In the swinging sixties, when no-one who was there can remember what they were doing, the government, in its own hallucinogenic fog, reduced the community enhancing network to  model railway levels at a stroke and prepared the ground for the rise of that most potent of status symbols the private motor car. This may not have been so bad but the flood gates were also opened to the juggernaut, the leviathan of our day which shudders at seismic levels through now insomniac villages forcing us to build more motorways and by-passes on which they can wreak even more havoc. Many now carry a rear facing message inviting us to ring a number if they have been driven well. Not many people who have got close enough to read this have survived long enough to make the call!
To conclude. Each generation has to accommodate the technology of its day. Each generation also has to endure changes in technology which appear to herald a brighter future. The problem is that, until now, we haven’t lived long enough to see the effects of these ’improvements’. We are slowly awakening to the reality of what our industrial appetite and individual sense of freedom is doing to our planet, to our lives and to our heritage.
We need to stop, allow the hole to be repaired properly - and take this opportunity to consider what we can do to avoid making even bigger holes into which our children will inevitably fall.

© Graham Oakes.


Sunday, April 24, 2011

EASTER GARDEN


The Tomb.
With a finality beyond death, burial removes all trace of existence. Not enough you walked this earth, but you had to be consumed by it – embedded, implanted, sown in this fertile ground.

The Stone.
Heavy with our morbid fear and sealed with all the arrogance of a fallen humanity, it plays its lonely part.

The Garden.
Undisturbed peace. Mankind’s first (and last) resting place. Here, in the arboreal stillness, as leaves respire and sap cools, Nature, sublimely conscious of the Divine, waits, with expectant patience for its most glorious bud to flower.

The Dawn.
Never since its first creation has the sun appeared with greater humility. On this Day a broken body lives again and holy blood pulses triumphantly through once emptied veins. The Son of God rises to still enclosed darkness and the Stone is rolled away. The Shutter opens for a greater Light to shine.

This final barrier does not and cannot resist the truth of Resurrection. Might and meaning; rite and religion; sight and science ... lose their dominance, though not as gladly as the morning star.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

The Gardener steps into his bower and is welcomed. Creation beams with joy at the presence of perfect Spring and faithful stems bend in the Spirit’s gentle breeze.

At last, a saddened and subdued humanity approaches, still clothed in unredeemable fear. Woman, first cursed by the Fall, is now First Blessed in this Garden as she walks and talks with her God again ... with great joy, she runs to man with the most favoured fruit of everlasting life … disrobed of fear, innocence is no longer ashamed ...

                                     … and, beneath the displaced Stone lies the bruised and bloodied form of a dying serpent …


© 2011 Graham Oakes.

Sunday, April 10, 2011

Mynyddislwyn Male Voice Choir 40th Anniversary Concert Blackwood Miners Institute September 23rd 2010

Written following attending their annual concert and pondering on the link between music and our environment.



Hewn from deep and darkened seams

Of rock and crumbling dusty coal.

Tempered like the rolling steel

from furnace fires of the soul.

Music quivers through the air

In the freedom we now share.


Something binds the working hearts

That beat to toil and agony.

Drawn to share their common bond

In tighter frames of harmony.

Music quivers through the air

In the freedom we now share.


Rising, caged, from deathly deep

Hope shines out from wearied eyes.

Beauty leaps from surfaced hours

And finds response in practised lives.

Music quivers through the air

In the freedom we now share.


Cleaner now the valley’s air

Gone the shafts that sucked earth cold.

Decades since have come and gone

Still we hear the sounds of gold.

Music quivers through the air

In the freedom we now share.





(c) 2010 Graham Oakes


The greenwood , flayed

Composed following some recent sermons on Mary and Joseph.

How great the God

we worship here,

Supreme above all things.

Revealed by words,

inspired and true,

the Holy Spirit brings.

Yet see, he chose to come to earth

not as a Warrior-King.

No, born in low humility,

such is the God we sing.


The virgin finds herself with child

and bears much hurt and shame.

Now her betrothed

must hold his thoughts,

as whispered is his name.

“Oh why should this be my reward,

for all the love I gave?”

The answer comes by angel voice,

“This child is born to save!”


So Joseph trusts

God’s strange command

and leaves the Law alone.

He learns to love a child, not his,

and tends him as his own.

Within this family are found

the wounds of love and grace

as God reveals his sovereign plan

to save our human race.


A carpenter

will teach his son

the worth and way of wood;

but this Son learns a harder way

to bring our world to good.

In echo of young Joseph’s cry

hear Jesus’ anguished prayer,

“O Father, why must this be so,

their scorn I should not bear?”


Deep sorrow

hangs upon the Cross,

and nails hold fast the shame.

As Jesus bleeds his mother weeps;

his Father turns away.

Such Horror,

never has earth known,

as Jesus dies for all.

Such Love,

that gives its all for me

before him I must fall.


The greenwood, flayed

and broken down,

is laid to rest in earth;

but like a seed that’s sown in death

it springs to fruitful birth.

How great the God

we worship here,

Supreme above all things;

the child who grew at Joseph’s side

now reigns as King of Kings.

Monday, January 03, 2011

Alternative Carols

The following was written in response to a friend having a moan about Carols ... in fact I have a few friends who don't appear to appreciate their lyrical merits ... it was interesting how these writings developed into one which tells the story of the Prodigal Son, still with a hint of Christmas.


Old Grumpy men rejoice

for you there is no choice.

Christmas comes but once a year

but still you have to show good cheer

soon it will be gone

soon it will be gone!

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

In this bleak mid-winter

I begin to moan.

Where are all the carols

I can sing alone?

Sentimental saccharin

leaves me quite upset.

Nothing like the story

no-one should forget!

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Silent night, don't be trite.

Noise was heard, every word!

Angels streaming in the sky,

shepherds screaming "Let us die!"

“We can't take any more ...

We can't take any more!”

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Away in a pig sty, no money, no friends;

the prodigal wonders if this is the end.

But then he remembers his Father's true worth

and runs for his home and the place of his birth.


His Father is weeping, his whole world is down;

his brother is hoping he'll never be found.

But when he is spotted, approaching the hill,

his Father rejoices for he loves him still.


The party has started, the calf's not impressed;

the prodigal weeps as in fine robes he's dressed.

The brother must welcome this wanderer back home

where grace, love and peace make a manger a throne!

Sunday, January 02, 2011

Just visiting

Sorry, have been out of the Blogosphere for some time (too long I hear you shriek) but am back now and will endeavour to maintain a presence, more or less dignified, just in case anyone shows a passing interest.

Thursday, August 21, 2008

Why the title?

2002 and our local Pentecostal church held a special open air event at our local showfield. Nothing special but I took my kids and some of their friends along. The preacher spoke about Jesus walking on the water and Peter taking the plunge.
I'm not sure what it was in particular that inspired me but I felt my creative juices flowing and came up with this song.
I eventually managed to share it with him in Canada of all places, some 5 years later!



Walking on the water.


Walking on the water is impossible to do
unless I look up from the waves
and fix my eyes on You.
Lord Jesus you are calling me
to come and walk Your way
to leave the safety of my boat
and follow You today.
But I don’t know if I can take
a single step towards You.
The water is so very deep
and the waves so very high.
And all You do is beckon me
with eyes that burn like fire.
Reaching me with deeper love,
and grace that’s even higher
than the waves,
than the waves,
than the waves of fear
that break against my soul.

Walking on the water is impossible to do
unless I look up from the waves
and fix my eyes on You.
So Jesus may I always look
straight into Your eyes
and know the truth that saves my soul
from drowning in this world’s lies.
And every step I take towards
Your blood-stained outstretched hands
reminds me that I am a part
of Your eternal plan,
that calls me to step out in faith –
and take Your Holy Fire –
reaching out with deeper love,
and grace that’s even higher
than the waves, than the waves,
than the waves that wreck
the life and soul of man.

Walking on the water is impossible to do
unless I look up from the waves
and fix my eyes on You.
So when the raging storms rush in,
threatening to flood,
support me with Your Spirit
and the power of Your Blood.
So walking on the water
will not seem so very new
when I’m walking with You, step by step,
and doing the things You do.
Reaching out with grace and love
to everyone in need.
To be Your hands, and share Your life
wherever You may lead
through the waves,
through the waves,
through the waves ...




Some years earlier I wrote the poem reproduced below during a church weekend away in Bournemouth. I often hope I'll remember it when I'm facing the storm. After sharing it with another friend and on visiting their home I discovered that it has been given pride of place in their downstairs cloakroom - and learned that they had passed on a copy to one of their friends and guess where they keep it ... in their cloakroom.

Well, I suppose that's some kind of exposure!!!



















Lord,

when all is calm,

and the sun is warm and soothing,

help me to trust in You …


for some day the storms will come,

dark clouds will rise over the hill,

and cold waters will overwhelm me …


remind me that You are here,

with me.


Here,

in the same boat;

as much Lord of the darkness as of the light,

as much Lord of the wind as of the calm,

as much Lord of the storm as of the stillness,

to which You bid us come,

and know,

that You are God.